I hate this advert. But not for the same reasons as all those people who complained - I just think it's shit. Potentially a good concept, but let down by taking itself way too seriously.. If you're message is that arrogant it helps to show a little humility first. On a practical note I think the style of the piece makes it hard to identify that it is in fact the same engineer fighting with himself.
If I had a chance to recut it I would pause longer on the first assailant to give the audience time to realise who he was and then do a Tongue in cheek challenge to come attack with his hand a la Morpheus from the matrix. By adding a softer more comic ironic feel I think the whole ad would perform better.
Less people might have complained about it too!
SH
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